Creative Writing

Date: 15th Feb 2016 @ 9:42pm

Below is a list of writing prompts.

Using the pictures as inspiration, can you write a short 100 word story/ description based on what you see. Your writing can be the build up to the picture, what is happening in the picture, what happens next, what someone is thinking in the picture...ANYTHING!

 

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Teddy Bear Car - Rosie Australia wrote:

"Would you like a cup of tea Mr Snuggles?" Asked Sophie, running across the room to get a teapot. She knew that they wouldn't reply to her of course, but she liked to imagine that they did.
"My name is Oliver!" A loud voice coming from behind her said. Turning around she saw Mr Snuggles, or Oliver, walking over to the rest of her bears.
"Get up!" He said, and all the bears lifted their heads and followed him out of the room. Sophie chased after them.
"Wait!" She called, but it was too late. They had hopped into her dad's new car and sped away.

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Teddy Bear Car - Reuben America wrote:

It was the strangest thing that I had ever seen. A bunch of old school teddy bears were on a joy ride along the empty motor way. The car that they were cruising in, was a smokey black Cadillac, with a silver bumper. It was a sweet convertible, with eagle white rims. The teddy driving,(papa bear,) had one of his stuffed arms slinging out the side. Neenawneenaw, wailed the blue and red sirens. "STEP ON IT PAPA!" Cried the other teddy in the front seat,(yolo bear,). So without a second thought, Papa bear stomped on the pedal, causing the wheels to screech. The pursuit began!

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Riley palin wrote:

There was a helicopter with toxic waste in, and they were taking it to a secret place where most people didn't know about and we're they were going was across the zoo and it slipped were there was only one giraffe because the rest were eating there dinner but he didn't want any, and then the giraffe called Steve jumped onto the tree. later all the people around the baracade said "oh no what's going to happen. The most horrible thing happened the giraffe fell of and never seen again.

Alisha and Holly wrote:

It was a nice story and we liked the way you put at the end of the your story a cliff hanger.

Zaharias wrote:

It was a good idea that you said toxic waste

Tahlia wrote:

Your story is really good you used lots of explination

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Ella H wrote:

Ghost Train - I was walking on the train track when I heard something peculiar, a sound of a train coming towards me but there was nothing there! All of a sudden, I was on the "ghost" train. I could see Ghosts and monsters drinking and talking. I shouted "Where am I?". A ghost (who looked quite young) said wickedly "you're a ghost girl with snakes for your hair." "What?" I asked looking down at myself, It was true I was a ghost. "Your new name is Medusa, welcome to the monster world,Medusa ha ha ha!" "Nooo!" I shouted . "I'm a ghost!"

Breya and Amelia wrote:

Me and Breya enjoyed the word peculiar. Also it was a great way to open a story.

Paige wrote:

Wow Ella it is an amazing story .

maddie wrote:

i like how you used peculiar it makes me want to read more :) :)

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Cole wrote:

One day I just went to space, man it was a lovey place I was watching space go by then all of a sudden a mahoosive meteor struck earth and made a loud BANG!!!!!! My ears rung so much as I was pushed back from no more earth. As I tried to get to my feet , which are killing so much, then I walked over to the smoking departing earth . Then here I am now siting on the moon writing in my diary waiting to die or to see if some one is alive but I will die probably.

Riley wrote:

I think you did like space

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I liked how dramatic it was πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β€οΈ A lot

Miah wrote:

Good story 😜

maddie wrote:

ilike your story :):):):)

maddie wrote:

cool story :):)

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Breya year 5 wrote:

Lucy ( a little girl) was walking her dog snuggles. then she sat down for a little rest on a park bench. Lucy (who was 9 going on 10) started singing to her self. she was singing a song called ``wild heart``. then Lucy hear a voice saying `that is very nice singing`. then. Lucy answered ` what? you heard me who said i have really nice singing`. `me` the voice replied in a really high pitched voice. then Lucy looked to her
right and saw clothes reading a book which looked like it had a body inside it. the body was speaking.

Lucia wrote:

I liked the way you ended on a cliff hanger. Because it made it a bit scary!

Annie 🌺 wrote:

Well done. I want to know what happens next and who it is. Next time do a capital when you start a sentence with 'then'

Amelia wrote:

I liked the way you used Adjectives and a lot of punctuation

Riley wrote:

I love your dog name snuggles

KathrynπŸ™‰ wrote:

I like it because it is like it is a scary and I really like how you described how the charcuterie who was whispering looked like and how it talked to her well done Breya

maddie wrote:

ye it was good i love the dogs name :)

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Train track-Katie class 11 wrote:

She walked along the long abandoned train track , carrying a battered old teddy bear and a heavy suitcas She used to be an orffen but they unfortunately closed down and as she had no family to take her in she had to wonder around in the world alone. So she ended up walking along an abandoned train track. When all of a sudden a train spead up the train track the girl jumped out of the way just in time so she did not die. Where did that train come from"93 "and I wonder when the last 99 train was on the track

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Alexander Class 11 wrote:

I was walking down a street to my mums house, and guess what I saw? The unusual site of stuffed teddy bears in my mum's Rolls Royce."Oh my raptor's ultimate mace!" I cried to myself. "What ya doin' standin' there in the cold?" "Who said that? I whispered. "Me of course, stupid kid!" Then I turned around, and to my surprise it was Mr.Scruffy (my mums childhood teddy bear)."You want a ride with me?" asked Mr.Scruffy. " Where exactly?" I questioned. " On the motorway!" replied Mr. Scruffy. So I hopped into the car and had the best night ever!

Lucia wrote:

I liked the way you made it your mums school teddy bear instead of yours.

Zakp wrote:

Good story

Edward wrote:

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Riley wrote:

Fabulous 😎😎😎😎😎😎

Holly and Alisha wrote:

We loved your story it was amazing

Katie and connor wrote:

We liked how you did not use a regular car and used an old one instead.

Annie wrote:

Awesome. It was so cool and not proper words. I wish that was true.
😎

ZAKARIOS wrote:

I liked it because it on a cliffhanger

Miah wrote:

So good I like it the way u put my mums childhood teddy bear

maddie wrote:

hi and i love your story it really got me hooked in i like how u put (my mums childhood teddy bear) so funny !!!!! :) :) :)

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Miah: teddy time wrote:

"Dad spead up I'm going to be late" as I shouted at my dad as we where driving really slow. " I'm going as fast as I can remember we don't have much petrol left. " why don't you going into the petrol station then it's only there." So he pulled in to the petrol station. He went inside and said " Wait there I'll be as fast as I can" " ok " He left with a SLAM when he shut the door. Whist my dad was getting the petrol out of the coner of my eye I saw the most weirdest thing in the history of weird. It was a car full of teddy bears.I pinched myself, then they were gone. " WHAT..............

Tahlia wrote:

I liked it when you said it was
Just a dream

Breya wrote:

I liked at the start you said " dad speed up I'm going to be late

Alexander wrote:

Miah I loved how you left on a cliffhanger 😊!

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Giraffe in the tree - Kathryn wrote:

There were a Giraffe and he woke up one day and saw something very peculiar he saw a massive tree and so he walked to it. But then something very loud came it his tummy it was even louder then anything so then he thought 'Maybe I can eat all of that tree. I haven't eaten for days's.' then he started eating from the bottom and soon he couldn't eat to the top because his neck wasn't that big so then he started climbing up at first he was terrible but then he started to climb and climb but he could get down ever again.

Harry B wrote:

This is very good I like how you used very descriptive words you done fantastic.

Harry B wrote:

This is very good I like how you used very descriptive words you done fantastic.

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Jacob D-Bowen wrote:

"La la la" said Laila while walking in the forest. She then found some keys on the floor. There was a jar as well. She picked them up and inside the jar was a note. The note said "Help us, we are in a tree with a door on the log. The keys are to open the door, BUT! and that is a big one CLOSE the door and LOCK it so no one can get in." Laila went to find the door to the tree.85 Then she found the door and was surprised. SHE was trapped. "Help me please, someone".

ZAKARIOS wrote:

I liked it how you left it on a cliff hanger

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Natasha wallesey liscard wrote:

It all started on the day I was evacuated to a new home in London, at first I was scared and didn't know what to do anymore my smile was gone and my sadness and tears where here I was staying with strangers and in a place I didn't know I stayed there for 3 days I was suppose to be staying for a week though I didn't like it there much though the was a great family there and they were really kind to me I was with my teddy bear and my suitcase and was heading down the pathway in the middle of a train track I found a new home with a smile on my face and the best life I could.

Alexander wrote:

Good story

Holly and Alisha wrote:

We loved it and we also liked it when you started of with that the girl never smiled but then she smiled at the end. Well done we really liked that.

Alice wrote:

well done Natasha love in :D

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connor class 11 wrote:

once there was a group of bears all sat on a Childs beds and every time this child (called Billy) used his imagination the teddy bears would come to life and do the thing billy was thinking of. One day billy was thinking about when he was older and he would be able to drive but there was a problem because he was thinking of driving a sweet ride he forgot the teddys would drive a sweet ride aswell so the teddys came to life and sped of at the speed of light.

Jack P wrote:

This was so short but it made me laugh out loud πŸ˜†

Jack A & Jayan wrote:

LIKE A BOSS! Connor

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It like how genitive it was πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

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Harry w wrote:

there were the two boys playing and looking around and there it was teddy bears they stood still ahhh one said shh said jack the teddy bears moved and got in the car the boys jumped off the cliff and it landed on a stick and the bears did ass well no they savied said zaylie help jack said a teddy bear was good and help'd them he had a truck and drove to a were house and ran in and he was a zombie and could control it and pick'd up a peese of cheese and the boys ran and plese somebody and someone came in and kick'd the zombie and grabed the boys dad one said it was Ean jacks dad whoo jack said I need somebody to heal me he has got bitan he went to a hospital and they got him heald fhoo zaylie said I need this break it was night. night jack said to zaylie and ean that was long day they both said night and it was all good for now wahahaha

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Alisha the giraffe class 11 wrote:

Dear Diary,
My mum or dad wouldn't let my go to the zoo. I kept begging them but every time they said "NO!"
So when Someone called Miah was giving some party invertations out to people but I thought she didn't give me one. Then she put one in my tray. I was so pleased that she gave me one. When the party arrived, I was so excited. First we went to go and see the lions, then the elephants, then the meerkats but when we went to go and see the giraffes there was something different. A giraffe was climbing a tree. I asked Miah's mum if giraffes are mint to climb tree as but she said that they don't. So we just left them and walked towards the car. Then we had lunch in there and set off.
The end

Katie and Connor wrote:

We liked how it was a diary not like a story

Lucia wrote:

The bit I really liked was the way you just made it quite casual that the giraffe was climbing a tree.🌲

Harry B wrote:

πŸ“’awesome using a diary setup for it I really liked the Dear Diary

Breya wrote:

I liked how you did your story in a diary setting

Jack P wrote:

I liked how you did it as a diary

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Amelia (the teddy bear in the car) wrote:

Once I was walking down the road and I could here a noise coming from a car. So I whent up there and I saw some stuffed teddy bears beaping a horn the one of them said " are you coming I haven't got all day to Stand here waiting for you all day I have got to go to work . So I jumped in and feeling quite sleepy because I was in a car full off lots and lots of stuffed bed time animals i felt a bit nevouse because I thought people where coming passed me calling me a weird person because stuffed animals where driving a car I even thought it was a bit weird that stuffed animals are driving a car how do they even believe this ?

Breya wrote:

I love the way you opens your story. Also how you didn't use boring words and you used exciting words

Tahlia wrote:

That story is πŸ‘really good πŸ‘

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Tree Problems-Harry B wrote:

i was climbing up a tree to get the last leave but when i was about to it fell.I was in a shock after that so i went and called for help but nobody came.i was dangling over a river i really needed help but at that moment i slipped.i was in a rush down a rapid river there was no one to help. but then i reached the waterfall and someone saved my life. i was praising them they had helped me so i helped them back.

Kathryn wrote:

I liked it because it is like a adventure and you are describing after the tree . And how there was a warter full in the story

Lily B- Upton Hall FCJ wrote:

Oh wow, I loved it, it is very detailed I sat at home and watched you type it so- ITS AMAZING!

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Lucia wrote:

Her face was clear, no expression was marked anywhere. I flew like any other bird above her, my black wings spread out. Where was she going?

I walked alongside her nothing but her imaginary friend. What was going to happen. Where are we going?

I skulked in the outskirts of the forest watching the girl. She seemed confident, my long tail culed up behind my shiny back. Where where they going?

My chesnut brown hair fell down my pretty yellow dress. I clutched onto my suitcase. Where are we going?

Katie wrote:

I liked the cliffhanger at the end

Zakp wrote:

Amazing story πŸ˜€

Alexander wrote:

I liked the way you wrote in descriptive writing

Holly and Alisha wrote:

We absolutely love your story we loved the clif hanger and your wow word !!!!

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Zaylie wrote:

I was walking in the forest when I saw something glistening in the corner of my eye.It started to shine more in the sun so I went over to see what it was.When I saw it,it was an old abandoned train track.I followed it to the end of it but as I was walking I heard a noise.Suddenly as I looked behind me I saw the old abandoned train,I knew it was going to hit me if I didn't move.As i jumped out the way I could see a shadowy figure in the window........

Ella M wrote:

Cool Fish πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ˜€πŸ€“

Lm wrote:

Soooooooo cool
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Katie wrote:

What happens next

wrote:

😱 what happens next

Amelia wrote:

What happens next

Luc wrote:

I really like the way you describe the ghost (or whatever the shadowy figure is)!

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book of life -Maddie class 12 :) wrote:

One night there was a girl called Lucy and she had a book and she wrote everything she thought of so she took it every were she went to find some new adventures every day. But one night, Lucy was so tired from trying to write some fun stories so she fell asleep and the book was open, then small flicker of light came out of the book and lit up the room but Lucy woke up in shock looking at the light confused and she said"oh my gosh!" but Lucy saw a little doll on the bed side table staring her she felt like she was in a horror movie suddenly the book exploded with the characters pop out the book she was terrified, she closed the book and was paralized she would not move but every thing was still out of the book ....... how would you feel if this happend to you!!!!!

Tahlia wrote:

That's really good

Jack p wrote:

Well doneπŸ‘πŸ˜€

Jack P and Paige wrote:

Jack P : I would shout help me!!!!!!!!! If it happened to me.
Paige : I would run away and scream my head off.😱😱😱😱😱😱😱

Chris wrote:

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The lost and found key - Olivia class 12 wrote:

Every morning a little girl called Courtney went on a walk but one morning she was walking in the park and stopped because she saw something on the floor and decided to stop. There was a potion and a key she picked them up and looked ahead there was a tree with a door. She tried the key on that door and it opened screeching. She walked in "AGGGGGGGHHHHHH" !!!!! she screamed out anxiously. Inside was lots of people dressed up so they looked scary Courtney forgot it was Halloween so she dressed up and went to trick or treat!!!!!!

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Nile 12 The girl wrote:

I was walking in the park with my dog called lily. I ran with lily when lily got to sue the most pretty flower. I look at it I thought I have never seen this flower I love flower so I know all about flower. Then I got the flower and when home I look at for a minute then I small it was ok . But then I went in to the bath room ....I but INVISIBLE my clothier are not invisible . BUT my lily didn't see me but when I got one of her toy she knew that I was there. I went in my bed room .TO BE CONTINUED.

Miah wrote:

I β™₯️ Your story

Alisha and Holly wrote:

We liked the way you wrote that the dog (sue) was invisable.

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The Four Teddy Bears - Alice year 5 wrote:

One day there were four teddy bears, all alone in the zoo gift shop hung up on a pole. While they were hung up on the pole a crazy professor came into the gift shop, dropped a glass jar containing a weird potion and somehow the potion splashed on the four teddy bears and all of a sudden they started to grow, suddenly they were able to move! They were a bit scared to get down but they have always wanted to get down so one of them said "1...2...3...JUMP!!", all of the bears jumped, escaped out of the gift shop, and out of the zoo without getting seen, they saw a car with no roof, so they jumped into it but little did they know the potion only lasted for one hour. Slowly they started to get smaller and smaller, and OH NO!! they were not alive anymore, they were back to being stuffed toys, so they couldn't get back to were they belonged. A couple of minutes later a family headed towards them .They got into the car and thought the zoo had given them a present, so they drove home with the four teddy bears and the family lived happily ever after.

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Teddy bear car - Tom year 5 England wrote: wrote:

"Come on swag bear we have to get away from the cops!" Jeff said in a loud tone. "I'm going as fast as this car can go." the bears were on a getaway mission because they had just stole the crown of Queen Elizabeth the second! "there getting closer so step on it!" A couple of minutes later super bear threw a smoke grenade and nobody could see a thing, "come on now is our chance!" All the bears sped away in there black awesome car. To celebrate their victory they went to the local bar and had beer.

Lucia m wrote:

I really like the idea of them being villans.well done!

I liked it how you stared the story cool wrote:

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Exploring the deep ocean -Joe wrote:

Me and my dad are very alike because we both like the same sports,food and fish. I asked my dad if I could go fishing with him for the first time ever. So the next day he said that I could go fishing so I raced upstairs and got my ghost green waterproof clothes on. We went early because that is when the fish start swimming in the ocean. Later on in my life i became a diver and my parents were extremely proud. Then once i saw the most amazing sight ever it was a whale

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Edward Class11 wrote:

BOOM! It was the brightest light he'd ever seen. The earth, gone forever. A meteor had just sliced through the world's core. He felt a wave of cold air and fell to his knees, devastated. He looked at the crumbling planet before him, his family, friends all gone and thought to himself 'Why have I survived? Why me?' He hoped that he had been a good son and made his parents proud. He hoped that he had been a good father and he hoped that his children had been happy.
He hoped that his wife had known how much he loved her.

Alexander wrote:

This is really Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious!

Annie 🌺 wrote:

I like how you started it with BOOM. Next time start a sentence but not use 'he hoped'.

Chris wrote:

I liked it when you started it with BOOM

Connor and Katie wrote:

Very creative

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sadie year 5 the invisible person wrote:

I walked in the park minding my own business as I approached a bench. I saw something weird sat there a looked again and to my surprise there was a lady sitting there but her body was gone all that was there was her clothes and a book she was reading. Slowly I walked towards the odd person and then I realised it was actually a invisible person . I wanted to try and figure this mystery out but my mouth opened widely and then I said with wonder "I might be invisible too you never know." Then I looked down at myself I suddenly screamed I was invisible too!

Hannah wrote:

😊 yours is really good

Paige wrote:

That's a lot of good things about it.SadieπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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Jayan-The get away teddy wrote:

once a upon a time there lived a farmer and his little girl called Rose.They lived in hollywood a really beautiful and lovely place but the part Rose was living in was nasty,smelly,despicable and the worst thing is know one lived there.The good thing about having any one near you except her dad is you can have peace and quiet.One day some campers were driving by and sure Rose and her dad working so the campers came up to Rose and said"hear little girl have these"and so the camper pulled out teddy but then suddenly the teddy attack the camper and ran of to the car and drove away never to be seen again.

Edward wrote:

Not bad, not bad. I liked the vocabulary in the story. 120 words try to less the words.

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Teddy Bear Car-Xander year 5 wrote:

''Come on the police are coming for us.'' They had just stolen a black Chevrolet and where driving away in it. It was their first robbery and so far it was going well ,now they had to get the police off their tail. They tried everything to try and get the police to lose sight of them. There was a broken bridge then the teddy bears jumped it but then the police also jumped. Eventually they gave up because they couldn't get the police off them so they drove into a car park and when the police stopped they ran.

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Nikola wrote:

I was walking in the forest one day with my friend and we were playing tag along the way. That is until i heard a thump 'owchies!' i heard and turned, as my friend was getting up from the ground. we laughed until we cried and we had to sit down for breath.As i sat down, i felt something hard under my knee, a key, a rather weird looking key to be exact. We examined it and looked around for the owner. No one. Whos this key, and what does it open?

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GIRAFFE - BY ZAKARIOS (ENGLIND) wrote:

Grahhhhhhh said the King of the zoo. Ahhhhhhh said the long neck animal. Go away I don't like you. Can I eat you said the lion no I'll teast horrible. Does he call him self the King of the jungle wissped the giraffe. Back get back said the zoo keeper. Say good by to the lion giraffe he's going back to the wild oh yeah oh yeah said the giraffe while he was dacing don't be to happy some other animals are coming. What animal said the scared long neck animal. Giraffe meet the rhinos , rhinos meet giraffe. SEE YA as the giraffe runs away and clamed up a tree.

Riley wrote:

I love the way at the start when you put arrg anyway your my best friend

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Jack A wrote:

I was walking down the street when strangely I saw a gang of teddies literally sitting in an old Cadillac,parked up with their radio on. I heard a shout from the car and I turned around and saw the teddy in the drivers seat by the steering wheel waving me over! They asked me if I wanted to go to McDonald's with them,I said yes but then I found out that they were taking me home with them to play and have dinner at their own house instead. I'm fine now but it was pretty strange at first!

Chris wrote:

I liked how you said that you were going to go to MACKDONALDS

Chris wrote:

I really liked how you used the teddies to say do you want to go to MACK,DONALDS and then how you went to there house instead to have tea.

Lm wrote:

SameπŸ‘

Edward wrote:

I liked the way you said they had a radio in the car.

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Harry O - Tree giraffe wrote:

One day a giraffe woke up and found himself in a tree.His name was Callum and Callum said "how did I get up here?" He is saying to himself "I'm going to fall." So he clings on tight before he slips. Then a herd of elephants came stomping loudly through the forest. Callum shouted "STOP!" but it was no use, he carried on shouting until they finally stopped. One says, "yo dude what you doing up that tree?" Callum said, "I just woke up and found myself up here." So they knocked the tree down and he was safe.

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James ;) year 5 wrote:

we were getting ready to launch our rocket to the moon. 10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1 lift off we arrived at the moon. I was walking on the moon and I saw these random rocks on the floor. I touched one and as soon as I did that I heard a loud bang it was a big satellite it just went through the earth I heard other astronauts shouting "NO HOW THE EARTH IS DESTROYED ". I was panicking about my family and everyone there. Where am I going to live were not going to survive

Zakp wrote:

Cool story πŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜€πŸ˜„πŸ˜ƒ

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invisible lady- Hannah class 12 wrote:

Today I went for a walk in the park. I came to a nearby bench, I was about to sit down to have a rest, I couldn't believe my eyes as I stud there stunned. On the bench there was a lilac white scarf wrapped around a black top. The black top was tucked into a black and grey ish white checked skirt that was slightly levitating above an old green, slated bench. Underneath the bench there were a pair of tan high heels. The invisible lady, to my amazement was reading a book wearing a long pair of black gloves she then reached over and turned the page! Its very rude to stair,so i walked away!

Tahlia wrote:

You used loads of detail

Paige wrote:

Wow Hannah that is amazing I love how you gave it expresion

Sadie wrote:

Wow it's very good πŸ˜€

Sadie wrote:

Wow it's very good πŸ˜€

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Laila Class 12 Pogo Hopping giraffe wrote:

On a fine sunny day Gerry the Giraffe was hopping a long on his Pogo stick,he suddenly heard a cry for help and looking up into a near by tree Gerry realised a kitten was stuck up in the tree.
Giving an extra strong hop on his Pogo stick Gerry landed in the tree on top of a squirrels nest and in doing so knocked little miss kitty out of the tree. "Get out of my house you clumsy creature " yelled the squirrel and began throwing nuts at Gerry.
To the squirrels astonishment Gerry jumped and hopped away home.

Annie wrote:

I love the story. It makes me laugh and I hope you write another one like that.

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chris plant explode wrote:

one day a boy called :Chris decided to be an astronaut made his rocket filled with secret missiles . then he set of to capture and be the moons dad. when he arrived it was night and all the stars were as shiny as the moon and the moon the stars . when he tried to capture the moon(just as he planed) he saw a planet EXPLODE looked looked like planet EARTH ! so as quick as FLASH, he jumped into a rocket zoomed away. Right at this moment he is telling this to everyone.

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Ella-giraffe up a tree wrote:

How did I get here I do not know,my friends are laughing at me and there are humans are pointing flashing lights in my eyes and they are beginning to hurt,I am worried that they may start to melt. I am a coward and a giraffe up a tree.Can someone please help me,I am stuck up a tree!Eventually someone noticed I was stuck and they were humans but any help will do.They brought a thing called a ladder but that thing did not work so they brought a lifting machine and I was safe

Annie wrote:

Awesome
I love how you put lots of detail and how the giraffe is feeling. I feel very sorry for the giraffe when he/she was up the tree.

Nile wrote wrote:

love it

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THE BOOKπŸ˜€Jack Pearson class 11 wrote:

Once there was a little old lady who enjoyed reading. She was just an ordinary grandmother with an ordinary family and an ordinary life. Even the brand she got her false teeth from was called ordinary!!! BUT and this is a big but because one day her life stopped being ordinary and I am going to try my best to tell you this story... Ok here goes one day the ordinary grandmother I told you about was reading a book. She thought it was the most boring book she had ever read. So, one day she was reading this extremely long 976 page book she fell asleep. When she woke up she woke up to here a man saying "you didn't get to the bit I killed someone " and the grandmother said yes because if I did get to that bit the book is so long i would be 7000 years old" and having heard that the man walked over the the granny with a knife in his hand and you could probably guess what happened next! Well you where wrong because he gave her a hug and said "Thank you now in my next book I know how to improve! Don't make it as long!"

Jack Pearson wrote:

Whoops! I think I wrote a lot more than 100 words
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Paige wrote:

I think you done very well but you could make it a bit shorterπŸ‘

Chris wrote:

I LIKED IT HOW YOU SAID AN OLD LADY LOVED READING

Jack A wrote:

I really liked how the descriptive writing and the words you used really fitted in with the story

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Lm wrote:

I was on a walk when the craziest thing happened so I saw this car with a bunch of old school teddy's. They seemed to be chasing a car full of money but then I saw Harry Potter was driving to which seemed to be going to hogwarts to give to Ron because he was sick so I jumped onto the teddys car and got in. We chased them to hogwarts and cop's corned them to the sea and sent them to mackimam prison and we left, had some mild and went our different ways so that is the story of the teddy bear car. I am going to play minecraft now bye

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Tahlia Class 11 wrote:

At last,on my holidays,at my favourite place in the world Australia,this is where I dream of most nights. I dream that I am scuba diving in the best place in the world,and finally I am here.under the water deep down in the sea,fishes all different colours,plants,all shapes and sizes. The most dangerous thing I could of seen is a shark.but what if I did, what if a shark really eat me that would be scary, but no it wouldn't Australian only have nice sharks . Don't they? Anyway wish me good look hopefully there isn't any sharks.

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Adam mcwilliam - teddy bear car year 5 wrote:

"Come on, Yolo bear, step on it".The Bears were in a old satin black Cadalac with shiny chrome bumpers and blacked out windows.The cops were after them and they were getting closer now. Mr bigless ,who was in the back, shouted " You ain't going to catch us now, are you?", but this distracted Yolo bear and he lost control and came off the road. The old Cadalac bounced and bumped down the embankment and crashed into a tree.
The Bears were all a little dazed, "I think this means we are going to be spending the night in the police station" said Mr Bigless and with that the police arrived and started to drag them out to arrest them.

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Annie Green: Lucy's Journey wrote:

Sally has moved to another town because her dad has a new job. Lucy realises that Sally left her favourite teddy, which Lucy gave her as a sign of being best friends. Sally's moved far away but Lucy won’t give up- she must get teddy back to Sally.

One morning while her parents were sleeping, Lucy packed everything required for her journey. After walking for what seemed like hours, she came across a train track---the only way to Sally’s house! This was dangerous but teddy represented their special friendship. Then, she suddenly heard a train coming but there was nowhere to go...

Breya wrote:

I loved the way how you opened your story with a lot of description how Sally moved house because her dad had a new job. I like how on the second paragraph ' while her parents were sleeping Lucy packed her bag

Kathryn wrote:

Well done I like the cliff hanger and how it means her best friend gave her a teddy. And I like how she cares about her so she try's to gives it back well done annie

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Eden Year 5 wrote:

At that moment the world was pierc a hole through the earth at that moment my heart was pierced. I was stranded alone alone ALONE ! Now I am running out of air ,food and water. My wife and my kids all my family! My life is Rooned. Why god why do you tour tut me leav me alone kill me kill me why won't you let me die . No I can not bring my self to do it help me pleas . I have noting I am a broken man just let me die. Here I go bye bye life It has been fun. Ahhhhhhhh save me life has been fun.

Cole wrote:

Well done Eden . I liked your discriptin on your heart brakeingand your life being crushed in front of you.πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»

Miah wrote:

It's really good well doneπŸ‘

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Ruby wrote:

I was in my bed I couldn't get to sleep. I could hear something near my door I was so nervous. There was a creaking sound it sounded like it was coming closer and closer to me. My curtins were blowing the windo wasn't even open. I wasn't brave anough to get out of my bed and see what it was I was so tempted to but I felt like that was a bad choice. No this can't be it has to be a dream it has to. OH NO THERE WAS A SOUND NOT JUST A SOUND A CREEPY SOUND I NEEDED TO GET OUT OF BED AND SEE WHAT THE HECK IT IS! And so I did I was so scared I finally got out of bed. And then BAM AAAARRRHGG!!! It got me I was so scared I couldn't see a thing it was like a monster the thorns on the head it looked so evil I was screaming for help but there was no answer the evil thing was all red like it was really angry and I finally seen it I was IN HELL!! (Dn dn Dnnn)

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Mark wrote:

A world famous swimmer was getting ready for the best competition in his life he was going to compete in the ocean where there is lots of dangerous see creatures he just got his swimsuit on and was going to jump in the ocean his task is to get a rare cristal but he had to pass lots of dangerous see creatures. He jumped into the ocean with his divers suit and he was ready to get the special cristal he swooshed through the water and suddenly he saw a humpback whale sleeping he swam slowly suddenly he knocked over some corle and BANG!!!!!! BASH!!!!! CLUNG!!!! All of the corle fell "oh no" he said AAAAAAAAA!!!!! He swam as fast as he could but he was swimming too fast that he did not see where he was going "AAAAA!!!! He swam in a pile of rocks and the whale ate him the end

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Matthew wrote:

One day there was a mission to go to space two astronauts would go back up to space and put a flag up but one thing became a big mistake they're rocket lifted off but turned around and crashed through the world it hit the worlds core boom mm!!! The rocket fire deplored into little bits and the astronauts both disappeared that was the end of them

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Jack305 wrote:

Once there were a nome he had a key the was to open something there was a little nome. He was the mans grandson he had wanted to Know what that key opened "what would be to do with that key "said the boy". His grandfather fell asleep and he seen the key he piked up the key and ran outside he seen all of a sudden there wasa door frew a tree he went frew and there were a wizard and lots of working poisons working

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